原文
Christmas is United States holiday.
聖誕節是美國的節日.
It is at December 25.
聖誕節是12月25日
We celebrate together in Taiwan too.
我們在台灣也會一起慶祝
It has a story for Christmas.
聖誕節有一個故事.
Children prepare a sock in the bed desk before bed.
孩子在睡前準備一支襪子放在床邊桌子.
The old man will give a gift in the sock.
有一個老人將給予一個禮物在襪子裡.
In the morning, children can see the gift in the sock.
到了早上,孩子可以看到禮物在襪子裡.
修改後
Christmas is a holiday of United States
聖誕節是美國的節日.
It is on December 25.
聖誕節是12月25日
We celebrate it together in Taiwan, too.
我們在台灣也會一起慶祝
It has a story for Christmas.
聖誕節有一個故事.
Children prepare socks to put on the table near the bed before they sleep.
孩子在睡前準備一支襪子放在床邊桌子.
The old man will put a gift in the sock.
有一個老人將給予一個禮物在襪子裡.
In the morning, children can see the gift in the sock.
到了早上,孩子可以看到禮物在襪子
